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Deja Vu: Introduction Part 1
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I might do a part 2 for the introductory because of the way I think this is going. This part will be introduction of the people and part 2 will be introduction of the place and how the people got there. Got it? Good.
Kristina Ofoedu was a 13 year old girl. She was a freshman. She was a not so normal girl. She was polite to adults unless they got on her nerves or they were close to her so she could act like herself. She was a A and B student and ruled in gym class. Her favorite game in gym was football. Her brother was one the football coach's favorites and one of the athletic director's favorites. Her sister played basketball and ran cross country and track. Obviously it runs in the family so Kristina O. was also very athletic. She was also one of the athletic director's favorites. She played volleyball, basketball, softball, went to dance class on Saturdays, and went to chess club on Wednesdays at school. Kristina O. wanted to become a
actress/dancer/pharmisist/hair stylist/watever she wanted to be/oh yea. She loved her friends and was thinking she would never someone that would love her. Adults that she met including ones she didn't even know said she was pretty except she didn't think the same. She had a big ponytail full of nappy hair. Her hair was always in a ponytail, but when she had it straightened, it was long and down to the middle of her back. She had long eyelashes and honey brown eyes. She also had caramel skin. Her body was fit because of all the things she did. She was about 5'5. Kristina had dimples in her cheecks when she gave a large smile.
Jalissa Freedman was a 17 year old junior. She was Cajun which meant she was a good girl with a wild side and has a little attitude. She's a straight B student and never did drugs or anything. She plans on staying pure until marriage as did Kristina. They got detentions 5% of the time for either not doing their homework or fighting with girls who thought they were the shiz. Jalissa played violin and Kristina played the flute in the school band. Jalissa acted in the drama club with Kristina and danced with Kristina. She has a little brother who played with Krisina's nephew at the same daycare. Jalissa was beautiful. She had an Aaliyah hairstyle that made her look mysterious. It made all the boys drool all over her. She had such a white smile that the room seemed to brighten up. She had a body that was as tight as Kristina's if not more(Kristina loved eating food). She was about 5'6. She had almot yellow skin except it was a very light caramel. She had bubble cheeks when she smiled. Her eyes were almost a green hazel. Even though there was a big age gap and grade gap between Jalissa and Kristina, they were still very close to each other.
Rachel Crews was the oldest, craziest, and most caring of the three. She acted as if Kristina and Jalissa were her little sisters. She was 19 and off at college. When she was at the school with Kristina and Jalissa, they were the three that everyone knew and everyone tried to be best friends with. Rachel did volleyball and taekwando. Her body was fit because of it and her eating ice cream and chocolate didn't affect her. Doing taekwando made her mind open up to different things so she became a forgivng, understanding, and caring person. It was hard to make her angry because of it. She also became smarter. She was a straight A student and graduated in the honors society. She sang, played the piano, started learning the guitar when she left high school, and wrote her own music. She loved to laugh and and smile. When she smiled, people began to have big grins form on their faces. When she laughed, people began to just stare at her like she was an angel. She had chesnut brown eyes and light brown hair that just brushed past her shoulders. She was 5'6 like Jalissa.
All kept in close touch even when Rachel left for college. She sometimes stopped by the school to visit Kristina and Jalissa. They were best friends even though Kristina was the youngest. They all had many things in common, but there was the most important of all....the Jonas Brothers. They liked the Jonas Brothers and weren't crazy fans of theirs. They simply liked the boys. Jalissa, Rachel, and Kristina never thought they would ever meet them or go to a concert, but obviously if I'm writing this story they are completely wrong. They are very wrong.....
Ok people. Here is the deal. I want comments. I am serious. If u read this then please comment. I really wanna see if people like where I'm going with the story. I'm gonna post part 2 of the intro on May 3. Don't know when on May 3 but sometime. Please tell people to read about it. Want more people to like it and be pumped. Comments make me feel happy. here is what i will do. I want 5 comments by different people saying if they like the story. I'm not writing until I get 5 comments. Please comment, tell a friend, and subscribe! Sorry about the video
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